NetFic

I kept the story because it was great but I had to skip entire chapters because of the explicit sex. I think the author would be able to tell the story without it, and I wish the app would let me delete it. The writer does need to work on proper sentence structure and do a much better job of proofreading Some of the sentences were so bad you had to just feel your way. The author should write more, her plot was really good. The end was inconsistent, what happened to all the souls Anthem possessed if he still lives?

The book I read had so many mistakes at times I had to stop and rethink who was who and their relationship to each other. Near the end of the book there were several paragraphs that seemed like instructions to an AI writing app about converting it to be geared toward an American audience. It basically instructed it to rewrite everything but keep the meaning. There were a lot of things that did not make sense to American culture like eating soup and burgers for breakfast, always using chopsticks, and referring to anyone older than them as uncle and aunt. The storyline was really choppy and all over the place. The worst part, the book didn’t even finish. It was all of the sudden very rushed and there was no ending. App deleted. Don’t waste your time. Clearly the reviews that say it’s great are false.

Watching the ads between chapters is fine and expected for free reading. However, I am an avid reader and when I have time to sit down and read I want to settle in and enjoy. But to deal with the short amount of time someone else limits me to is not worth the trouble and frustration. The books here are all the same exact plot in different circumstances. I believe this is all AI written and controlled - where are the books that have substance worth reading? Give us real choices. Not the same thing over and over with name changes and slightly different towns and industries. Too bad I have to go to a brick and mortar library to not be controlled by AI. It is also too bad my pleasure of reading online is completely controlled by some who have no idea of my needs on reading, only their need to control me on their terms. Guess I have to go back to the old ways by going to a library and checking out real books so I can get what I need and want from reading. This is a joke. Really - I have to spin a wheel to see how much time YOU are allowing me to read once a day? Keep your ridiculous site and control. Pleasure reading is a leisurely past time you fit into your life on your terms, needs and wants with your personal time schedule allowances.