Win Over the Flawed Girl

I like it, for the most part. Short and sweet plots, I feel like it could be something amazing if the developer(s) picked one great big plot and focused on making that a whole game. Somethings I don’t like however are you just straight up failing if you pick the “incorrect” option. Pick your path games like this I feel should at least branch off to a different path even if it’s one or two options after picking the “incorrect” option. If the developer(s) are NOT going to make it like that and go for a more Henry Stickman type of thing where you die immediately after picking the wrong option, at least make it funny. That way it’s not just the player being slightly inconvenienced and having to pick the other option and watching an ad to progress the story. Trust me it gets annoying, I tried to do every option but the ads became too much and eventually I just picked the correct option and skipped the ad watching.

It gives you choices and yes it’s a short game but I love it! The choices are very interesting like (spoiler alert) when ur neighbor loses her key choose “invite inside ur house” and do eat her food she makes if you choose “help find key” you both die after 3 days of starvation and choose “no thank u” when she offers her food she jumps off the balcony(so sorry I needed an example 😭) and the graphics are amazing a lot of adds but they can be easy skipped through and quickly removed

Some decisions need to be modified because some don’t make sense in the context of other places so an example is the cop one where it’s like call the police or fight the nerds off if we’re basing this off of America you’re doing both so it’s either they’re like really convoluted or like expects too much like the cops aren’t gonna magically appear and the band one made no sense at all literally a rave party and once you take out your lights out, you are in big trouble I’ll because you did it but everybody else is literally screaming and shouting so some options do you need rethinking? That’s why it’s not a five stars but it’s not a three stars because other options are extremely good as in they make you think not to mention that the characters don’t have a really short stories to make you think about what to do and what not to do but some of them do need a little bit more grammar fixes because some paragraphs are kind of Engrish. As in they don’t make sense but that’s just a meeting. Those are like smaller knit picks on this other than that it is what it.