The Iron Destinies

So I haven't played the full thing but that's because the trial did not get me into it at all, the choices you make in the trial were very lackluster and then when the part you've been waiting for finally appears it asks you to pay, really? It's paying for a gamble and I feel like I would lose, sorry, but please make the demo at least a little bit longer to help get people into it first

Original but way to narrative in style. Huge leaps of undefined "evolution" from being a FE to a living being. Weird but original and very imaginative. Lots of replay I'll give it that...if you can tolerate the style of writing. So far 5 different endings but not terribly impressed.

I played until the point where it asked for money to continue. Usually by that point, a game has involved you in caring about your character, and I always pay. In this case, there had been just a few turns, the action seemed random, and I had no interest in continuing to play. Certainly I had no interest in paying $4 to continue playing. Note to the author, on the off-chance the game improves later, you might fare better if you put the "buy" check-point a little later.