Attack of the Clockwork Army

The setting for this story was very unique among Choice Games and created interesting conflicts between pro-British and Rebel characters. Unfortunately, these weren't played out particularly effectively once revealed. Many of the choices seemed false, as if the author knew what they wanted to happen and forced it regardless of the player's choice in various scenarios. This left me feeling frustrated on several occasions and took me completely out of the story.

What a loose and scatter brained read this is. The story it's self had potential. The poor character development, among other issues, as well as the execution the story and the readers choices was nothing less than a pointless time killing chore for this reader. Save your cash.

Pros: 1) The unique steampunk Australian setting provided a nice change of pace from other Hosted Games which generally take place in America or a high fantasy realm. I enjoyed the whole magical metal thing! 2) The writing is very strong. The author vividly describes characters, locations and actions and maintains a consistent tone throughout the story. 3) The main character is not all-powerful! This raises the tension during the various action scenes. My Wish: I would have enjoyed more discussion and analysis of why our character should sympathize with the Brits or the colonists. Overall, a very well-written and enjoyable read!